Forum :: Artists :: Silk Dress and Football Clothes

I have just been doodling every so often, and I am just touching up on my skills.

I made a dress:

Edit:


Football clothes:



Comments and criticism please

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It looks really awkward around the boob part. It kind of looks like the girl put on a bra 2x small to lift her boobs up higher, but I really like it. It kind of reminds me of links outfit, but a girls version. 

colbymsn posted: (16th Jun 2013, 05:41 pm)

It looks really awkward around the boob part. It kind of looks like the girl put on a bra 2x small to lift her boobs up higher, but I really like it. It kind of reminds me of links outfit, but a girls version. 

Does this look better as far as the breasts go?


And thank you

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Sort of looks like they're poking out to the sides now. But it still looks great.

Ryouken posted: (16th Jun 2013, 06:49 pm)

Sort of looks like they're poking out to the sides now. But it still looks great.

to be fair the EO sprites don't leave allot to work with.allot wrong with the standard Arvid sprites to deal with

Flazex posted: (16th Jun 2013, 06:14 pm)

colbymsn posted: (16th Jun 2013, 05:41 pm)

It looks really awkward around the boob part. It kind of looks like the girl put on a bra 2x small to lift her boobs up higher, but I really like it. It kind of reminds me of links outfit, but a girls version. 

Does this look better as far as the breasts go?


And thank you

not to bad just keep trying till you make them look alright.

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Updated a new piece in my main post. Comments and criticism please and thank you.

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well the shading isn't to bad however the clothing's outlines follows the outline of the sprite to directly it doesn't look like its something being worn rather like its painted onto the persons body.try making the pants and shirts outlines going slightly outside of the sprites outline.also i would suggest pixeling your female costume on the matching female sprite for that male one as far as i know the proportions are far better.

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Xlembros posted: (17th Jun 2013, 11:59 pm)

well the shading isn't to bad however the clothing's outlines follows the outline of the sprite to directly it doesn't look like its something being worn rather like its painted onto the persons body.try making the pants and shirts outlines going slightly outside of the sprites outline.also i would suggest pixeling your female costume on the matching female sprite for that male one as far as i know the proportions are far better.

The shirt, I can see what you're saying, but football pants are suppose to be tight and hug the players legs. Again, I do see what you're saying.

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Dress looks nice, think it could use a little thinner shading above the belt. Look like the top half of her is doing some weird forward lean.

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did some edits

stava posted: (21st Jun 2013, 07:19 am)

did some edits

Edits look amazing, Stava!

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