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Dont dismiss this outright as the work of some raving lunatic. There is some sense to this story, if you will just hear me out.

Look, we all wonder if time travel is possible, right? Well, let me tell you something : it is. I am from the future, actually. I know you probably dont believe that, but seriously, I am from the future. It is a really great thing; getting to see the past, watching events unfold stuff like that. We know more now than we ever would.

Behind all the fun, though, there is a more serious aspect. We are not supposed to go in our own lifetime, and we are NEVER allowed to contact our past selves. Let me tell you, I am breaking that rule right now. Yes, kid, you are  talking to yourself. Your future self. I am going to be executed for this, but you know what? I accept that. I am preventing something by talking to you that is WORSE than death. I can  tell you outright what to do, because the filters would catch it. This is the closest I can get, trust me. I can, however, send a little message.

You should probably read the first word of every paragraph, now.

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Nurd posted: (28th Feb 2013, 05:11 pm)

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"Do Look Behind You"? Technically don't isn't a word.

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Misca posted: (28th Feb 2013, 07:50 pm)

Nurd posted: (28th Feb 2013, 05:11 pm)

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"Do Look Behind You"? Technically don't isn't a word.

don't is a compound word so i think it is a word.

anyways i cant look behind me because a wall is behind me....=/

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Moonie posted: (28th Feb 2013, 08:33 pm)

Misca posted: (28th Feb 2013, 07:50 pm)

Nurd posted: (28th Feb 2013, 05:11 pm)

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"Do Look Behind You"? Technically don't isn't a word.

don't is a compound word so i think it is a word.

anyways i cant look behind me because a wall is behind me....=/

Can't is a contraction of the words "Do" and "Not" So if you read it without using the apostrophe it reads "Do Look Behind You". Which either way effectively means for you to turn around. If you tell someone not to do something, chances are they will do it.

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It seems very similar to the film Loopers to me but as a starting point for a story its ok, Write more and I will be able to give better feedback,as there is little to give a positive critique. Serj how you finding the beta? (Btw I have a degree in which one of the modules was creative writing... so I kinda know what I am talking about)

Misca = party breaker. kbai

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