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Misca why are you even carrying on with this dude 0_o i didn't know we were in english classes stfu Radioactive =_= its Eoserv not fucken school gtfo kid

Tiduss posted: (8th Feb 2013, 07:26 pm)

Misca why are you even carrying on with this dude 0_o i didn't know we were in english classes stfu Radioactive =_= its Eoserv not fucken school gtfo kid

Well for starters I have nothing better to do since I am waiting for my next class to start. Second, I find it kind of humorous that he can't keep an argument neutral, being influenced highly by his emotions.

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oh okay Misca xD do what you want D:

Lol. Ok stupid you're right. I made up "lmao". Wow you're stupid. I'm hated online? I could care less. I'm also hated in the real world? Lmfao!! Sure I am kid. @tidusss: He's carrying on because he's an idiot. He'll catch on eventually. I'm not in nor am I on top if any thing . Therefore I cannot gtfo.

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The 2nd Best in the world.

lol its cute how hard your 'trying' to act clever but your not impressing anyone.... and when i said gtfo i mean't Eoserv and you knew that but your trying to act smart but its really childish cause your prob dumb as hell in real

Radioactive posted: (8th Feb 2013, 07:31 pm)

Lol. Ok stupid you're right. I made up "lmao". Wow you're stupid. I'm hated online? I could care less. I'm also hated in the real world? Lmfao!! Sure I am kid. @tidusss: He's carrying on because he's an idiot. He'll catch on eventually. I'm not in nor am I on top if any thing . Therefore I cannot gtfo.

I'm still waiting for you to prove that you have an IQ higher than 143. I have been waiting since yesterday and you have still failed to prove to me how I am an idiot. "I'm not in, nor am I on top if anything, therefore I cannot get out." I fixed your sentence, but apparently since I am such an idiot you will think my corrections are incorrect.

Also, prove that you are smarter than me by taking an accredited IQ test. Here is a link to find more information in case you can't figure out how to do it yourself:

http://www.mensa.org/

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Lol. Ok stupid you're right. I made up "lmao". Wow you're stupid. I'm hated online? I could care less. I'm also hated in the real world? Lmfao!! Sure I am kid. @tidusss: He's carrying on because he's an idiot. He'll catch on eventually. I'm not in nor am I on top if any thing . Therefore I cannot gtfo. @misca: this isn't an argument at all. You must be mad if you think this is. You're in between classes. Socialize with the friends claim you have. @tidusss: who's acting? It's funny that you can't add periods at the end of sentences. It's funny that you don't know the difference between your and you're. How do you even know that hell is dumb? Did you ancestors tell you?

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ima leave this to you Misca this skid is fucken annoying so gay >.> cya

Radioactive posted: (8th Feb 2013, 07:39 pm)

Lol. Ok stupid you're right. I made up "lmao". Wow you're stupid. I'm hated online? I could care less. I'm also hated in the real world? Lmfao!! Sure I am kid. @tidusss: He's carrying on because he's an idiot. He'll catch on eventually. I'm not in nor am I on top if any thing . Therefore I cannot gtfo. @misca: this isn't an argument at all. You must be mad if you think this is. You're in between classes. Socialize with the friends claim you have. @tidusss: who's acting? It's funny that you can't add periods at the end of sentences. It's funny that you don't know the difference between your and you're. How do you even know that hell is dumb? Did you ancestors tell you?

You're right, if it was an argument you would have actually said something relevant. I must be mad, what is that the best insult that you could come up with? And how can I socialize with people when they are in classes? I am not the kind of prick who interrupts people when they are supposed to be learning. Also, way to copy and paste half of your post from above.

Alright Tiduss, good luck with whatever you will be doing.

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Former multi-server mapper.

Lmfao. All of your friends are in class right now? I find that hard to believe with your lying ass. I want to give you a round of applause. You seem to use alot of words that I throw towards you. Thanks for trying to be like me. I also find it funny that you think I'm trying to insult you. Insults are caused by anger. I'm not angry at all. Thanks again for making me giggle throughout this entire thread.

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The 2nd Best in the world.

Radioactive posted: (8th Feb 2013, 07:54 pm)

Lmfao. All of your friends are in class right now? I find that hard to believe with your lying ass. I want to give you a round of applause. You seem to use alot of words that I throw towards you. Thanks for trying to be like me. I also find it funny that you think I'm trying to insult you. Insults are caused by anger. I'm not angry at all. Thanks again for making me giggle throughout this entire thread.

Go ahead, find it hard to believe, that just proves that your brain can't comprehend much. "Alot", it seems you can't even type two words without making a mistake. When did I say you were trying to insult me, the answer is never. And if you aren't angry you wouldn't be trying to put people down or act like you are more superior than people. Read my new signature, maybe you'll get something out of it, or maybe you won't. Or better yet, don't read it at all, your brain will just hurt from thinking about it too much.

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Former multi-server mapper.

Guys.. just stop there's no point in this senseless arguing.

@Radioactive Didn't you say you were going to stop trolling and arguing a few weeks back?

Funny how almost all of moonie's topics ends up with arguements.

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Nerva posted: (8th Feb 2013, 08:03 pm)

Guys.. just stop there's no point in this senseless arguing.

@Radioactive Didn't you say you were going to stop trolling and arguing a few weeks back?

Funny how almost all of moonie's topics ends up with arguements.

I wouldn't call it an argument, that assumes he has valid points. Anyways, I will stop after he has learned his place. If he really was as superior as he claimed to be it wouldn't take him relatively 10 minutes to respond. Even if it took him two minutes to read it through, that is still fairly sad.

And it seems that Moonie is fairly good at creating topics that cause people to argue.

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Former multi-server mapper.

Nerva posted: (8th Feb 2013, 08:03 pm)

Guys.. just stop there's no point in this senseless arguing.

@Radioactive Didn't you say you were going to stop trolling and arguing a few weeks back?

Funny how almost all of moonie's topics ends up with arguements.

I thought i was the only one who noticed.

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Radioactive posted: (8th Feb 2013, 04:21 pm)

Proper grammar must be included in the story for it to be successful. Learn to spell before posting shit on here. It's "beginning" not begining. Thought I should shed some wisdom on your sad ass story.

Goddamn moonie. You can't spell for shit can you? I'll help you out. First it's surrounding not sorrounding. 2: it's an operating table not a operating table. 3: it's. Favorite not faverite. 4: it's been not Ben. Wow, I've come to the conclusion that most of you people on eoserv are idiots.

i dont care about spelling i ment feed back or critic the story

like if u ppl have nothing to say about it then stfu idc about ur gay ass grammar wars i write how i want jesus.

i dont want to see anouther fucking grammer wars shit on here i tl;dr

misca: jesus like i wanted serious feed back not troll wars, this was a serious topic 

u wanna go troll go troll on the other 5 topics i have going

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