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i had a very vivid dream about a group of kids who were named after food and drinks and i wanted to make a story out of it 

this is just the main characters info not the actual story.

feedback, comments, critisism welcome.  if its about spelling and shit like that i dont careeee xD 

anouther video so u can see wut peppers fighting style is like (BADASS) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pAltTNq_bS8

Intro:

Cokie cola was a spunky young girl (16) who was full of energy (perhaphs from drinking cokacola all day) who had a nack for fighting. She was very confident and at times a bit cocky, but she was one of the best female fighters in her school. She was tan with long brown hair and eyes, she was about 5'5 and had a athletic build to her. Cola's school was very diffrent from the traditional schools, many unique looking kids with special talents roamed the halls, most students had ben outcasted in society for there diffrences, but here everyone was accepted and was allowed to practice their talents.

Cola wasnt the only good fighter in her school, she was part of a team consisting of 4 other people. Dr.pepper (18), everyone just called him pepper, was the founderand leader of the team. he was a tall guy around 6ft tall. he was brazillian and was always wearing his black sunglasses, he had long darkbrown dreaded hair that went down to his waist and offten wore a red leather jacket with a white shirt and black jeans. His fighting style was very diffrent from anyone elses, he was a capoeira master. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z8xxgFpK-NM) his movements were so graceful yet deadly. Dispite being a better fighter than cola, pepper had a very diffrent additude he was very laid backed and humble. he didnt really look for fights like cola did, he much perffered to help his teammates train and get better at fighting.

Skittles was peppers faverite student, she was a small young girl who was no older than 13. she was very light skinned with short bright blond hair and blue eyes. sheofften wore colorful hairclips in her hair and colorful clothes to match her very bubbly personality. She didnt look much like a fighter but her flexibility and determination to win drove her to become a very unpredictable opponent. cola loved skittles for her sweet nature and refused to ever spare with her, afraid she'd hurt the poor girl. however that didnt stop pepper from kicking her ass everyday during practice sessions. "she'll never get any better if you baby her." he said to cola one day.

one person cola couldnt stand was reeses, he was her so-called rival, they both spent most of their time trying to out-do one anouther. reeses was waaaay to cocky,atleast when she was cocky it was kinda cute. Reeses was older than cola only by a year, he was dominican with dark brown eyes and light brown and blonde hair that he offten kept hidden by wearing a beanie. He was a gifted fighter, to bad he wasted most of his time getting into fights with cola, he loved to tease and mock herwhenever he could. He wasnt all bad, although he wouldnt admit it he enjoyed his scuffles with cola just because she was a challange, but that wasnt going to stop him from teasing her about being a tomboy and having small boobs.

Brussel sprout was the last member of the team, everyone called him sprout which was very misleading. Sprout was a big muscular guy who looked as though he was onsteroids he was so buffed. He was pale with shoulder length greesey green hair and eyes. He was so intimidating not many people talked to him and were scared of the big guy, of course cola wasnt most people. She always said Hi and waved to sprout whenever passing him in the hallway, she wasnt intimidated by his big size and scarey appearance and invited him to become a member of the team. he at first refused claiming he had never really fought before, but after much persuasion from cola (and when i say that i mean begging) he finaly accepted to be apart of the team. 

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Are they called Cokie just because you like cookies?

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Misca posted: (31st Jan 2013, 07:09 pm)

Are they called Cokie just because you like cookies?

co-kee

its how i say coka cola inrl i say co-kee cola xD

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''She was tan with long brown hair and eyes''

SHE HAS EYES?!

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Nurd posted: (31st Jan 2013, 07:16 pm)

''She was tan with long brown hair and eyes''

SHE HAS EYES?!

And I'm sorry, but a pale guy with green hair sounds like willy wonka's oompa loompas

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Misca posted: (31st Jan 2013, 07:18 pm)

Nurd posted: (31st Jan 2013, 07:16 pm)

''She was tan with long brown hair and eyes''

SHE HAS EYES?!

Yes, but it never says how many eyes.

And I'm sorry, but a pale guy with green hair sounds like willy wonka's oompa loompas

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Moonie posted: (31st Jan 2013, 07:28 pm)

Misca posted: (31st Jan 2013, 07:18 pm)

Nurd posted: (31st Jan 2013, 07:16 pm)

''She was tan with long brown hair and eyes''

SHE HAS EYES?!

Yes, but it never says how many eyes.

And I'm sorry, but a pale guy with green hair sounds like willy wonka's oompa loompas

  oompa loompas r orange >:O

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Misca posted: (31st Jan 2013, 07:34 pm)

Moonie posted: (31st Jan 2013, 07:28 pm)

Misca posted: (31st Jan 2013, 07:18 pm)

Nurd posted: (31st Jan 2013, 07:16 pm)

''She was tan with long brown hair and eyes''

SHE HAS EYES?!

Yes, but it never says how many eyes.

And I'm sorry, but a pale guy with green hair sounds like willy wonka's oompa loompas

  oompa loompas r orange >:O

Yes, and if they were tan they would be a dark orange/brown, therefore they are pale in comparison. 

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