Forum :: Lounge :: FE trailer my second attempt!

Well this is my second attempt at an FE trailer.

Watch in HD or it looks gey:

Click me C&C would be appreciated

Credits are in the video, description as well.

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Hehe, It's looking very nice. I Liked how you finished the intro's song I've added, because as far as I know, it isn't the full song. Congrats dude. it's very good. +1

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Flame posted: (3rd Sep 2012, 10:08 pm)

Hehe, It's looking very nice. I Liked how you finished the intro's song I've added, because as far as I know, it isn't the full song. Congrats dude. it's very good. +1

Thanks man, I learn from the best. Any C&C? ;D

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Actually yeah. On the Join today,  you could have changed the font. Making something more interesting. Or add some background, perhaps a moving abstract image. For example, take a look on the Fallen kingdom announcement trailer: The whole video has movement while writing appears. It's good to call attention. But overall, the video is good. Congrats

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thanks man :D

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I like it, but the music was a bit slow, and there was to much text, if you look how the other trailers are they have exciting music and it shows the features more, and has less text.

but yeah it's pretty good +1

fruity posted: (3rd Sep 2012, 10:27 pm)

I like it, but the music was a bit slow, and there was to much text, if you look how the other trailers are they have exciting music and it shows the features more, and has less text.

but yeah it's pretty good +1

Well, thanks it's only my second try though. I'm new to trailer making. :P My first one was horrible. I had no direction and it was just molested with MMM effects. I felt so ashamed. ;(

But this turned out much better then I though.

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Came in strong but ended up weak. Other than that it was awesome!

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"I had a beer today." "Beer Sucks."

Quite the conversation I would have.

That aside, the video is nice, but I would've chosen some other font, I would also close up some battle phases as if there is some action, or like speed up serveral videos where you're killing npcs, to show variation. Other then that as I said before, it's a nice vid to watch.

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"Pineapples and shit."

I don't consider quests on FE fun, but nice trailer.

The only thing id say, is the white text on the near enough white background is difficult to read, But its still pretty good,

I like FE's other trailers. Even though FE sucks huge donkey balls.

Try using a different font with those little white words that pop up.

hey i liked the introduction, ah could you make it download able :3 cause youtube cost on my phone :) downloading doesnt

jakee posted: (4th Sep 2012, 10:17 am)

The only thing id say, is the white text on the near enough white background is difficult to read, But its still pretty good,

even in HD it was hard to read? Do you by chance require glasses? (not being rude I'm just curious because that's pretty clear in HD.)

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@Hollow I've recently added some new quests. Might want to check those out :p

@Soulbanisher You're just upset because you got banned. It's not my fault you wanted to server trade, I just happened to catch you.

Only thing I can really say to improve the trailer is to maybe show a more in depth view of the features we have that you mentioned (quests, art, training, ect).

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