Forum :: Artists :: Pokemon Red Online Sprites (W.I.P)

Nerah posted: (23rd Aug 2012, 11:04 pm)

stava posted: (23rd Aug 2012, 10:59 pm)

I like the project, I like the way it's going

but there's some flaws

• Player sprite is larger than the tree
• The tree is also small compared to the chair
•  if you end this fence or whatever it is with your original tiles it would have a hole, you can fill the hole and it won't make a difference, the next tile should overlay it
• The way dirt and grass connect should be more natural, atm the dirt cuts straight trough the grass..
• ^- Same for the dark/light grass connection
• Don't forget to add shadows later on under the objects :)
• Player sprite has really realistic shading/coloring and doesn't match the background style..

I don't really see why that red carpet/grass connection is like that.. why is red carpet outlined from all the sides, it's not gonna tile like that..

 what is it supposed to be? if it's supposed to be a small rug why not make it a object? :P

Thanks Stava, Glad you like it and looks like i got some work to do, i will work on fixing all the tiles and the carpet is an object it just added in there for the showcase.

And your right the player does need to be more simplistic to go with the style, maybe a whole new character model.(But when i get time after fixing all the small things that will add up :D)

Also the trees have been changed in the latest video.(There now taller then the player, but if i change the player he will be smaller.)

But here is a Screenshot:

Thanks Stava for honest critique :D

-Nerah

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stava posted: (23rd Aug 2012, 11:16 pm)

that looks awesome +1

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The GUI is amazing! Altho the level of your pokemon would be cool to see in there card :D

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Standard posted: (23rd Aug 2012, 11:59 pm)

The GUI is amazing! Altho the level of your pokemon would be cool to see in there card :D

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Thanks for clearing it up, im goin to finish watch "Oh Sit"(Show like Wipeout)

and then ill work on my new player model

-Nerah

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Nerah posted: (24th Aug 2012, 12:26 am)

Thanks for clearing it up, im goin to finish watch "Oh Sit"(Show like Wipeout)

and then ill work on my new player model

-Nerah

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Nerah posted: (23rd Aug 2012, 11:04 pm)

stava posted: (23rd Aug 2012, 10:59 pm)

I like the project, I like the way it's going

but there's some flaws

• Player sprite is larger than the tree
• The tree is also small compared to the chair
•  if you end this fence or whatever it is with your original tiles it would have a hole, you can fill the hole and it won't make a difference, the next tile should overlay it
• The way dirt and grass connect should be more natural, atm the dirt cuts straight trough the grass..
• ^- Same for the dark/light grass connection
• Don't forget to add shadows later on under the objects :)
• Player sprite has really realistic shading/coloring and doesn't match the background style..

I don't really see why that red carpet/grass connection is like that.. why is red carpet outlined from all the sides, it's not gonna tile like that..

 what is it supposed to be? if it's supposed to be a small rug why not make it a object? :P

Thanks Stava, Glad you like it and looks like i got some work to do, i will work on fixing all the tiles and the carpet is an object it just added in there for the showcase.

And your right the player does need to be more simplistic to go with the style, maybe a whole new character model.(But when i get time after fixing all the small things that will add up :D)

Also the trees have been changed in the latest video.(There now taller then the player, but if i change the player he will be smaller.)

But here is a Screenshot:

Thanks Stava for honest critique :D

-Nerah

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Owner of the original Culio PK - PK Worldz

Ramy posted: (24th Aug 2012, 12:55 am)

Nerah posted: (23rd Aug 2012, 11:04 pm)

stava posted: (23rd Aug 2012, 10:59 pm)

I like the project, I like the way it's going

but there's some flaws

• Player sprite is larger than the tree
• The tree is also small compared to the chair
•  if you end this fence or whatever it is with your original tiles it would have a hole, you can fill the hole and it won't make a difference, the next tile should overlay it
• The way dirt and grass connect should be more natural, atm the dirt cuts straight trough the grass..
• ^- Same for the dark/light grass connection
• Don't forget to add shadows later on under the objects :)
• Player sprite has really realistic shading/coloring and doesn't match the background style..

I don't really see why that red carpet/grass connection is like that.. why is red carpet outlined from all the sides, it's not gonna tile like that..

 what is it supposed to be? if it's supposed to be a small rug why not make it a object? :P

Thanks Stava, Glad you like it and looks like i got some work to do, i will work on fixing all the tiles and the carpet is an object it just added in there for the showcase.

And your right the player does need to be more simplistic to go with the style, maybe a whole new character model.(But when i get time after fixing all the small things that will add up :D)

Also the trees have been changed in the latest video.(There now taller then the player, but if i change the player he will be smaller.)

But here is a Screenshot:

Thanks Stava for honest critique :D

-Nerah

I noticed that all your pokemon are the same level. They still level up individually depending on how often you use them in battle, right?

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Elaya posted: (24th Aug 2012, 12:58 am)

Ramy posted: (24th Aug 2012, 12:55 am)

Nerah posted: (23rd Aug 2012, 11:04 pm)

stava posted: (23rd Aug 2012, 10:59 pm)

I like the project, I like the way it's going

but there's some flaws

• Player sprite is larger than the tree
• The tree is also small compared to the chair
•  if you end this fence or whatever it is with your original tiles it would have a hole, you can fill the hole and it won't make a difference, the next tile should overlay it
• The way dirt and grass connect should be more natural, atm the dirt cuts straight trough the grass..
• ^- Same for the dark/light grass connection
• Don't forget to add shadows later on under the objects :)
• Player sprite has really realistic shading/coloring and doesn't match the background style..

I don't really see why that red carpet/grass connection is like that.. why is red carpet outlined from all the sides, it's not gonna tile like that..

 what is it supposed to be? if it's supposed to be a small rug why not make it a object? :P

Thanks Stava, Glad you like it and looks like i got some work to do, i will work on fixing all the tiles and the carpet is an object it just added in there for the showcase.

And your right the player does need to be more simplistic to go with the style, maybe a whole new character model.(But when i get time after fixing all the small things that will add up :D)

Also the trees have been changed in the latest video.(There now taller then the player, but if i change the player he will be smaller.)

But here is a Screenshot:

Thanks Stava for honest critique :D

-Nerah

I noticed that all your pokemon are the same level. They still level up individually depending on how often you use them in battle, right?

The GUI clearly isn't finished, the levels shown are just examples. :)

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@nerah, a suggestion, i would unify your light source or else your shadows are all over the place. Your chair has a light source behind it while the fence has one in front of it and etc.

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“Everybody is a genius. But if you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will live its
whole life believing that it is stupid.” - Albert Einstein

Owner of the original Culio PK - PK Worldz

Nerah posted: (24th Aug 2012, 01:06 am)

Elaya, again you fill my absence:D Love it! <3

-Nerah

PS working on the player sprite now.

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Yes, Ramy i love your ideas :D<3

and Me to Elaya!<3 :D

Wild i edited my above post with the reason why the light sources are all over :)

-Nerah

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