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Many years ago there was a land called Aeaven. It was full of nice people and lovely villagers until one day the Ice Queen and her son the Ice Prince made a palace of ice using dark magic at the top of the mountains.

 The villagers thought all dark magic was gone because they heard of a great myth what there great ancestors told them many years ago. This city was a battle ground between ice and fire. The fire team was led by the Mighty Leader Korotou. He was the Master of all Light Magic and Fire and he always was competing against others. The ruler of all Dark Magic was called Zaltan. Zaltan never liked Korotou because Zaltan always thought Korotou was better than him at all training lessons. As they grew up lots of battles happened between them but they always stopped. But one day something got too serious. The Ancient Master Of All Types Of Magic “Austen” was going to die soon and he needed someone to take his place but he knew it would be a tough decision. He asked for a contest between Korotou and Zaltan and they both accepted. During the contest Korotou was beating Zaltan Korotou only needed one more spell to defeat him and at the last second Zaltan cheated and casted the Master Spell of dark magic which went around the whole world and wiped out every single living thing and all was left was dark magic monsters rising all around the world. There was one survivor and he was Korotou. He then built up an army of Light Magic by casting a spell. They all knew how to use fire so he taught them some skills and techniques on how to improve. He and his army went out to destroy Zaltan and his army.  At the battle ground Korotou met Zaltan. Korotou fought with him for 5 days. Korotou and his army defeated Zaltan and his army. Korotou ruled the world and tried to destroy every single piece of evidence he could find about dark magic (End Of Myth). Korotou thought he destroyed every bit of evidence but obviously not. The Villagers started shouting “Dark Magic is back” to warn everyone to be ready for any attacks. The villagers all met up and discussed about the Ice queen. They wondered if she or the prince would cast “the Master Spell of dark magic”. They sent a person up to the mountains to spy on the ice queen. The person rushed back down the mountain to the group.  He said he heard the ice queen say to the ice prince “We will cast the spell at noon”. Everybody got scared and one of the villagers ran up to the group and shouted “We need to fight back”. Everybody went to the ancient temple of “Korotou” and worshiped for him to do something and stop the battle.  Everybody gave up their hope and went to the armoury and geared up for the battle. The villagers all lined up at the bridge at the village and waited for Zaltan. At noon the ice queen and her son cast a spell and unleashed her army of dark magic monsters. She commanded her army to attack the villagers. The villagers were really nervous.  They went out to battle and fought with all their might but there was no hope of them winning. There were a couple of people left but there was always one person who stood out.  His name was Peter. Peter was quiet and he didn’t like getting involved in things but that’s just Peter. Peter was sitting behind the tree praying for someone to help them. There was a great silence and then there was a very bright light.  It was Korotou rising from the dead. He flew up into the sky and came  flying back down as fast as a comet.  He hit the ground and the whole side where the monsters were went up in flames and killed them all. He went over to the survivors and told them who he was and he told them that it was Peter’s fault that he raised from the dead. He also apologised about the  death of the others. He said to them that it’s not the end of the dark magic because the Ice queen and prince were still alive. Korotou told them that they needed to defeat them Korotou and the group of survivors went to the ice palace. Korotou gave a fire spell to the survivors and he told the survivors to line up in front of the palace. He said “Say Glacial Inferno to cast your fire spell and aim it at the palace”. They all said it and they melted the palace and the Ice Family. Korotou went to the remains of the palace to see if the ice queen and prince were defeated and they were. Korotou brought their bodies to a volcano and dropped their bodies in the volcano. He said “That’s the last of the dark magic”. He went back to the village with the survivors and told them that he would give life to the villagers once again. He told the survivors to stay back and then Korotou walked into the middle of the battlefield and sacrificed his own soul for the dead villagers.  He raised all of the villagers and once again the villagers rebuilt their city and Korotou was the saviour of all life on earth.

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