Forum :: Lounge :: what have i done wrong with this quest

everything seems to be right to me?

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Main

{

        questname       "The Kings Help"

        version         1.0

}

state Begin

{

    desc    "Talk to the king"

    action  AddNpcText(22, "Welcome to my Castle, you look like a tough person would you mind helping a rich person such as myself?");

    action  AddNpcInput(22,1, "What's the job?");

    action  AddNpcInput(22,2, "No thanks");

    rule    InputNpc(1) goto Conquest

    rule    InputNpc(2) goto Coward

}

state Coward

{

    action    AddNpcText(22, "Well if you change your mind, I'll be here");

    action    Reset();

}

state Conquest

{

    desc    "prep talk"

    action  AddNpcText(22, "Ahh. Thats great news! You see I'm in the middle of being invaded and unfortuant for me, none of my guards are ready for the job");

    action  AddNpcText(22, "But luckily, you showed up! If you're ready, I'll tell you what you must do to save my Castle from being over thrown");

    action  AddNpcInput(22,1, "Yes enough of this talk, send me now");

    action  AddNpcInput(22,2, "Not just yet. Let me get ready");

    rule    InputNpc(1) goto Battle

}

state Battle

{

    desc    "Kill 100 Soldiers"

    action  AddNpcText(22, "Theres 100 Imperial Guards. I hope you can take them, come back to me after they're dead");

    action  SetCoord(200,13,13);

    rule    KilledNpcs(227,100) goto ReturnToTheKing

}

state ReturnToTheKing

{

    desc    "Return to the king"

    action  ShowHint("You slayed the opposing army, return to the King for your reward");

    action  SetCoord(8,8,12);

    action  AddNpcText(22, "The Castle is close to being saved, but there is more to be done!");

    rule    TalkedToNpc(22) goto SecondTask

}

state SecondTask

{

    desc    "speak to the king"

    action  AddNpcText(22, "I have a bit of bad news. While you were fighting, my great grand father's crown was stolen!");

    action  AddNpcText(22, "You must get it back!");

    action  AddNpcInput(22,1, "I'll get it");

    action  AddNpcInput(22,2, "Let me catch my breathe");

    rule    InputNpc(1) goto FindCrown

}

state FindCrown

{

    desc    "Find the stolen crown"

    action  AddNpcText(22, "The enemy might be trying to bury it, look for signs of digged up dirt");

    action  SetCoord(200,13,13);

    rule    EnterCoord(200,14,14) goto PickUpCrown

}

state PickUpCrown

{

    desc    "Return to the king with the crown"

    action  ShowHint("You found the crown, return to the king");

    action  GiveItems(411,1);

    action  SetCoord(8,8,12);

    action  AddNpcText(22, "You found my crown! Thank you so much!!");

    rule    TalkedToNpc(22) goto OneMoreDeed

}

state OneMoreDeed

{

    desc    "Finishing off the army"

    action  AddNpcText(22, "They're weak! Only 25 remain until they'll be forced to retreat. Go! Attack!");

    action  SetCoord(200,13,13);

    rule    KilledNpcs(227,25) goto Victory

}

state Victory

{

    desc    "Return to the King, the war is over"

    action  SetCoord(8,8,12);

    action  AddNpcText(22, "You have my many thanks, here is some wealth from the Castle");

    action  ShowHint("The king hands you 500,000 gold and gives you 2,000,000 EXP!");

    action  GiveExp(2000000);

    action  GiveItem(1500000);

    rule    TalkedToNpc(22) goto ResetQuest

}

state ResetQuest

{

    action    AddNpcText (22, "Wait, they returned with another army! Please help me again!");

    action    Reset();

}

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is the 22 the NPC ID or the number of the quest my friend?

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I saw a couple of small things.  The quest reward where it says give item.  You have it giving item 1500000.  Of course that's wrong it should be set to give 1 500000.  I don't remember the coding for that but, anyways that stuck out as wrong.  Also a coupleofmisspellings.  Not nothing to worry about but, digged should be dug.

   desc    "Find the stolen crown"

    action  AddNpcText(22, "The enemy might be trying to bury it, look for signs of dug up dirt");

    action  SetCoord(200,13,13);

    rule    EnterCoord(200,14,14) goto PickUpCrown

state Victory

{

    desc    "Return to the King, the war is over"

    action  SetCoord(8,8,12);

    action  AddNpcText(22, "You have my many thanks, here is some wealth from the Castle");

    action  ShowHint("The king hands you 500,000 gold and gives you 2,000,000 EXP!");

    action  GiveExp(2000000);

the reward that I meant.  this is fixed.  ----->  action  GiveItem(1,500000);

    rule    TalkedToNpc(22) goto ResetQuest

}

line 127  you have     action  GiveItems(411,1);

it should be     action  GiveItem(411,1);

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