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i made a movie plot ages ago, i got inspired by a movie called walled in, and i created my own twisted romance.

here it is:

In a small village in georgia, there lived a man, who lived alone in a dark abandond hospital where he lost all of his family, but for one baby son. The man was born in the middle of a war, only to see pain and suffering causing mental illness from the damaging images in his head, hebecameabrutal murderer, for years no one found the face to the disturbing killings. The man died of gut rot, but his son lived on...

Personally, I think its a little messed up :P But I think that's what you're going for? Maybe? It actually sounds pretty interesting as is. Just not my type of movie.

My type of movie would have the same background story but the son would fall in love with her after meeting her in the bar and try to win her affection rather than capturing her and forcing her to love him.

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ethanmoffat posted: (26th Aug 2011, 03:38 pm)

Personally, I think its a little messed up :P But I think that's what you're going for? Maybe? It actually sounds pretty interesting as is. Just not my type of movie.

My type of movie would have the same background story but the son would fall in love with her after meeting her in the bar and try to win her affection rather than capturing her and forcing her to love him.

haha xD yea im going for sick and twisted, if you ever seen walled in it kinda has that deffenition of captivating your love.but blake was raised differently so he doesnt know how to coperate, since he was born and raised by his sick twisted dad in an abandond hospital, he is classed as pysicallyunstaible, and he saw his dad do most of the murders, so blake beleives the way to love is to torture, he knows nothing else. :P you get the point right haha and thanks im glad you think its interesting


yea it is quite sick but then again there are sicker like saw...eww his eye =[

heh the only reason I watched "the cell" was to see jennifer lopez on a leash, so yeah I would watch it

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Redrocco posted: (26th Aug 2011, 03:46 pm)

heh the only reason I watched "the cell" was to see jennifer lopez on a leash, so yeah I would watch it

the cell? xD i never heard of it.. is it like the plot i did?

not exactly

the cell

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As an aspiring writer myself (or at least, I tried to be) it's an interesting but very dark themed story. Well suited to a horror/suspense thriller.

Quick question, how did you name the characters? I chose Blake for one of my primary characters as well (although the protagonist) and Erica for the protagonist's counterpart. For the most part, I chose them entirely at random.

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Redrocco posted: (26th Aug 2011, 03:49 pm)

not exactly

the cell

thats quite wierd..some parts of it remind me of queen of the damned.. i really like the headdress she has too, thats on a game called dress my babe, only thing is its a porno game o.o lol i'll show you http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/211488
i was 13 trying to find some dressup games and i liked this because it had the alien hand looking thing on her face xD then when i realised you could get her naked thats when i realised and i got off it faster than you could say omg xD

@sblord i think blake is a cool,sexy yet dark name, you can tell alot about a charactor if you name them correctly

Nice i like horror :) things like hospitals and ghosts freak me out, mental stuff not gory stuff, but if its gory it should be like scary blood face flashes hm ew lol im a image thinker -yes thats a word rofl- so i see it all in my head... nice story Tooty :)

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Daniel posted: (26th Aug 2011, 04:15 pm)

Nice i like horror :) things like hospitals and ghosts freak me out, mental stuff not gory stuff, but if its gory it should be like scary blood face flashes hm ew lol im a image thinker -yes thats a word rofl- so i see it all in my head... nice story Tooty :)

haha thank you :)