Forum :: Artists :: Helping out with pixels critique/edits!

Thats me again:

Oh good shading , I think just the lineart needs work. :P Maybe a bit on the shading.

Stava do you mind if i use the pixel of my wep that redone on my client i am making ?

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http://i46.tinypic.com/34j7k1l.jpg

stava posted: (7th Aug 2011, 07:31 pm)

I just fix up your stuff, it stays yours, and you have full credit for it, you can make sheet out of it if you like. :)

 lol see if this applies for you.

NecOne posted: (14th Aug 2011, 07:25 am)

Thats me again:

I don't want to take over Stava's thread but I haven't seen him online for a bit so I'd like to mention one or two things.
Stava Edits the armor and actually changes it so you can see what he did.
But if you keep making armors you should understand that the pure black color (darkest black) will be transparent in Endless online.
Also on the legs it seems you got the shading almost right, but on other parts you don't, hopefully Stava will pimp ur armor and you can compare.

@Stava, Don't use some high level techniques that took you 13 years of sweating and bleeding to learn in the most fearsome dojo of China. (unoimkiddinryt).

roefl posted: (14th Aug 2011, 11:05 am)
But if you keep making armors you should understand that the pure black color (darkest black) will be transparent in Endless online.

Oh right I forgot about it...

 just curious to see what you can do with these :o

Joker here:

NecOne the left shoulder (our view) is too far to left, it's supposed to follow the sprite angle, the shoulders shouldn't be the same size, left one should always be hidden behind the sprite, and like Roefl said no black outlines!

Mitch here: You need to add more highlight, the 2nd one especially looks unfinished, the details you put are so hard to notice

stava thanks so much it looks awesome

Lol i like the clown outfit / joker

WOAH MUCH nicer lol will edit mine now :o

stava posted: (15th Aug 2011, 09:57 pm)

Joker here:

NecOne the left shoulder (our view) is too far to left, it's supposed to follow the sprite angle, the shoulders shouldn't be the same size, left one should always be hidden behind the sprite, and like Roefl said no black outlines!

Mitch here: You need to add more highlight, the 2nd one especially looks unfinished, the details you put are so hard to notice

I helped with the shoulder pad things on the joker! :D Anyways... I think they all look awesome Stava. :D

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Yep.

I think what stava did with Joker's looks pretty epic da rest of em are good 2 :3

I am having some problems with the armor.. and i was hoping u could help :)

If u need the sprite:-

nice work stava