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Just seeing if you have any tips on how you would change this walking, some things I don't like about it.

Here's the still frame to show what I'm working with, the lines on the pants make it fairly tough to make look nice. Though its more-so the left(our left) sleeve that I'm having trouble with.

ty in advance Stavavavavavaaaa...

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Wildsurvival posted: (24th Aug 2011, 03:31 am)

Yugioh was a good show when i was in first grade >.< I still have some old cards of it though.

Yeah, you need to work on your outline then shade :P 

AntiAlex here: Idk if you wanted it iso or not, you never explained, so I edited it the way I wanted

Prefound here you go, didn't keep the design exactly same but didn't edit it much either:

Redrocco that's a odd request, but ohwell I didn't really try much here it is though:

Mitch, here: The legs still need work, they are too fat.

Loldude989, here:

Matt, I don't think the pants have issues, I think it's the top, standing sprite is really awful, a lot of the anatomy seems off together with isometric.. I worked on some edit on the sprite, and came up with this (5th is the final version, my favorite.)

And about the walking animation, maybe include some head movement?

ty stava that's great

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stava posted: (24th Aug 2011, 08:01 am)

AntiAlex here: Idk if you wanted it iso or not, you never explained, so I edited it the way I wanted

Prefound here you go, didn't keep the design exactly same but didn't edit it much either:

Redrocco that's a odd request, but ohwell I didn't really try much here it is though:

Mitch, here: The legs still need work, they are too fat.

Loldude989, here:

Matt, I don't think the pants have issues, I think it's the top, standing sprite is really awful, a lot of the anatomy seems off together with isometric.. I worked on some edit on the sprite, and came up with this (5th is the final version, my favorite.)

And about the walking animation, maybe include some head movement?

They are all bad-ass. :)

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Headbanging walking sprites FTW!

Anyway looking good Stevavaa~

Okay, so to answer any questions first off, the "head" of the axe is the owl from the original EO church roof-top cropped out and edited a bit. I don't claim ownership to that, but the handle's mine at least ;D.

Also, this piece is months old, it was more conceptual. Feel free to go as far off of it as you wish, I just wanna see what you do with it :).

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Holy shit yu-gi-oh one is awesome

stava posted: (24th Aug 2011, 08:01 am)

Matt, I don't think the pants have issues, I think it's the top, standing sprite is really awful, a lot of the anatomy seems off together with isometric.. I worked on some edit on the sprite, and came up with this (5th is the final version, my favorite.)

And about the walking animation, maybe include some head movement?

The sprite is mostly just a recolor of the EO sprite, I didn't change any of the upper anatomy I don't think, just reshaded. I know its not 100% fluent to iso, but I don't really think the change is necessary. Also makes it so I can't have any head movement, its for EO client. lol

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Devingg here :)

stava you amaze me, you can make some of the lamest stuff look good

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Neato mosquito

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it looks better and better

 lawl took like 3 minutes to make this Halp XD

or this :O

Here Mitch: