Forum :: Artists :: Helping out with pixels critique/edits!

it's not meant to be a normal rat/bat :] kind of an abnormal mutated thing

like birdmen

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Fixed it up..but the isometric isn't perfect yet (the ears and wings have small difference)

ohwell, EO isometric isn't perfect anyway..

Ps. in future when making ISO npcs use guide lines like I did (all the way to right)

oooh i like this, thx!

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stava posted: (19th Aug 2011, 12:30 pm)

Fixed it up..but the isometric isn't perfect yet (the ears and wings have small difference)

ohwell, EO isometric isn't perfect anyway..

Ps. in future when making ISO npcs use guide lines like I did (all the way to right)

idk if u got any trouble in me asking you for more critique, already using the last comment u gave me and its turning out great.

i made this for one of the pixel competitions and i want to know how it can be improved.

name is elmwood bow:

just to add a historic point to it, it's a bow that horseback archers used few hundered years ago, well it's meant to be that, why its so small

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Here's what I would do with it..

But I don't like the design really.. It's too small and boxy

I wasn't that fond of the bow but stava made it look alot better :D

stava posted: (19th Aug 2011, 11:28 am)

Hi Redrocco, here:

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Beware of your thoughts, they become your words. Beware of your words, they become your actions.
Beware of your actions, they become your habits. Beware of your habits, they become your character.
Beware of your character, it becomes your destiny.
- Unknown

Wow Stava, you're an amazing pixeler (:
Im kinda trying to learn to shade as good as you, found your guide
but anyways this is what i pixeled could you maybe adjust it abit and  tell me what you think? ty :D

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Daniel posted: (20th Aug 2011, 08:40 am)

Wow Stava, you're an amazing pixeler (:
Im kinda trying to learn to shade as good as you, found your guide
but anyways this is what i pixeled could you maybe adjust it abit and  tell me what you think? ty :D

Can you do avatars?

Caleb made this one for me and he couldn't figure out the eye.

Then i tried to add a right eye

But it still doesn't look right.. do u think u could fix it up a lil bit?

Nvm

READ BELOW WHY

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loldude989 posted: (20th Aug 2011, 02:55 pm)

Can you do avatars?

Caleb made this one for me and he couldn't figure out the eye.

Then i tried to add a right eye

But it still doesn't look right.. do u think u could fix it up a lil bit?

Umm if u have time stava could u possibly fix this??

It lacks isometric-ness(??) i guess.

Daniel yeah doesn't need much fixing, just the chest has awfully much colors..

Faiyaz here's what I did to make it better:

Thanks Stava, Your the best.