Forum :: Lounge :: Poetry.

Well, seeing as there's no other topic on poetry, I guess I'll make one. I'll be posting my poetry for the eoserv community to either read or perhaps post some of their own. I don't mind the criticism.

I'll keep posting more of my poetry (If you like it). If not, I'll quit posting. Just thought it'd be interesting for the community to express themselves in a poem or something. I'mma start off with a poem which is todo with winter and how cold can pretty much kill you. Anyways, enjoy.

Ice cold air,

Rushing, eventually hitting your cheeks,

You whisper as you cover your face,

Healing the cold, heat in-tenses, cold turning warm,

A wonderful feeling explodes inside,

Goosebumps meet the surface of the cold,

You shiver all over,

Feeling nothing but ice,

Frozen in time.

Ice cold air,

Rushing, eventually hitting your face,

You feel trapped,

You gasp for air,

It freezes your mouth,

You panic in need to rid of the cold,

You breathe out slowly,

Feeling the warmth of your breath,

You repeat this session over again.

Ice cold air,

Rushing, eventually hitting you all over,

You feel numb,

Again, your body shivers more,

Your body gives a slight tingle down your back,

Your heart beats fast,

Stopping, getting slower and slower,

Ice cold air,

Rushing, eventually killing off all heat present.

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♥(\(\    ☆       ♥            /)/)
(=' :') ☆   ♥(¯`•.•´¯)   ☆  (':'=)
(,('')('') ¤°﹒☆`•.¸.•´ ☆♥ (")("),)
☆ Love begins with an image; lust with a sensation. ☆

Awww, That's pretty sweet. Keep em coming :) Even if other don't like em. Give's some of us something to read :)

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I am an alien and not crazy!

Started on a poem a few months back but never finished it, it's only got 4 lines soo.. I was pretty depressed at the time.

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♥(\(\    ☆       ♥            /)/)
(=' :') ☆   ♥(¯`•.•´¯)   ☆  (':'=)
(,('')('') ¤°﹒☆`•.¸.•´ ☆♥ (")("),)
☆ Love begins with an image; lust with a sensation. ☆

Isn't poems has rhymes on their ends? XD 

zildjian97 posted: (26th Mar 2011 12:44 am)

Isn't poems has rhymes on their ends? XD 

Not all, there are all different types of poems.

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♥(\(\    ☆       ♥            /)/)
(=' :') ☆   ♥(¯`•.•´¯)   ☆  (':'=)
(,('')('') ¤°﹒☆`•.¸.•´ ☆♥ (")("),)
☆ Love begins with an image; lust with a sensation. ☆

Can I post poetry in Spanish? I only write poems in Spanish. (use google translater lol)

zildjian97 posted: (26th Mar 2011 12:44 am)

Isn't poems has rhymes on their ends? XD 

Poetry is an imaginative awareness of experience expressed through meaning, sound, and rhythmic language choices so as to evoke an emotional response. Poetry has been known to employ meter and rhyme, but this is by no means necessary. Poetry is an ancient form that has gone through numerous and drastic reinvention over time. The very nature of poetry as an authentic and individual mode of expression makes it nearly impossible to define.

Copy and pasted from somewhere else because it sounds better than what I'd explain it as. lol

GabrielGonza posted: (26th Mar 2011 12:49 am)

Can I post poetry in Spanish? I only write poem in Spanish. (use google translater lol)

Use an English translator? o;

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♥(\(\    ☆       ♥            /)/)
(=' :') ☆   ♥(¯`•.•´¯)   ☆  (':'=)
(,('')('') ¤°﹒☆`•.¸.•´ ☆♥ (")("),)
☆ Love begins with an image; lust with a sensation. ☆

Saintdraco posted: (26th Mar 2011 12:49 am)

zildjian97 posted: (26th Mar 2011 12:44 am)

Isn't poems has rhymes on their ends? XD 

Poetry is an imaginative awareness of experience expressed through meaning, sound, and rhythmic language choices so as to evoke an emotional response. Poetry has been known to employ meter and rhyme, but this is by no means necessary. Poetry is an ancient form that has gone through numerousanddrastic reinvention over time. The very nature of poetry as an authentic and individual mode of expression makes it nearly impossible to define.

Copy and pasted from somewhere else because it sounds better than what I'd explain it as. lol

omfg de javu...

I also have another I write about 2-3weeks ago;

                            Thoughts.

I lay here and write besides the candlelight,

Thinking to myself, ''Always me, why?'',

Hoping my worries get through the night,

Surpassing the stars in the distant dark sky.

It's always one problem after another one,

Sincerely one day after another day,

Bad thing is, we're no-where near done,

Oh how I wish, thinking as I may.

I want us to be like others; seems so perfect,

I do so want it, badly, but it goes wrong,

Although I know, it simply has to reflect,

So I just lay here, writing to the beat of this song.

You're my world, my everything and my life,

I don't regret our past, it's made us close,

I'm so badly in-love with you, perhaps one day I'll be your wife,

Just want you to know, I love you the most.

I love your smile and alot of other things too,

Think of you all the time, you're always on my mind,

Really glad there's just me and you,

You say you love me more, you're wrong I think you'll find.

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♥(\(\    ☆       ♥            /)/)
(=' :') ☆   ♥(¯`•.•´¯)   ☆  (':'=)
(,('')('') ¤°﹒☆`•.¸.•´ ☆♥ (")("),)
☆ Love begins with an image; lust with a sensation. ☆

Lust posted: (26th Mar 2011 12:58 am)

I also have another I write about 2-3weeks ago;

                            Thoughts.

I lay here and write besides the candlelight,

Thinking to myself, ''Always me, why?'',

Hoping my worries get through the night,

Surpassing the stars in the distant dark sky.

It's always one problem after another one,

Sincerely one day after another day,

Bad thing is, we're no-where near done,

Oh how I wish, thinking as I may.

I want us to be like others; seems so perfect,

I do so want it, badly, but it goes wrong,

Although I know, it simply has to reflect,

So I just lay here, writing to the beat of this song.

You're my world, my everything and my life,

I don't regret our past, it's made us close,

I'm so badly in-love with you, perhaps one day I'll be your wife,

Just want you to know, I love you the most.

I love your smile and alot of other things too,

Think of you all the time, you're always on my mind,

Really glad there's just me and you,

you say you love me more, you're wrong I think you'll find.

You have a talent for this. O: I like it.

GabrielGonza posted: (26th Mar 2011 12:59 am)

Lust posted: (26th Mar 2011 12:58 am)

I also have another I write about 2-3weeks ago;

                            Thoughts.

I lay here and write besides the candlelight,

Thinking to myself, ''Always me, why?'',

Hoping my worries get through the night,

Surpassing the stars in the distant dark sky.

It's always one problem after another one,

Sincerely one day after another day,

Bad thing is, we're no-where near done,

Oh how I wish, thinking as I may.

I want us to be like others; seems so perfect,

I do so want it, badly, but it goes wrong,

Although I know, it simply has to reflect,

So I just lay here, writing to the beat of this song.

You're my world, my everything and my life,

I don't regret our past, it's made us close,

I'm so badly in-love with you, perhaps one day I'll be your wife,

Just want you to know, I love you the most.

I love your smile and alot of other things too,

Think of you all the time, you're always on my mind,

Really glad there's just me and you,

you say you love me more, you're wrong I think you'll find.

You have a talent for this. O: I like it.

Thank you. :p

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♥(\(\    ☆       ♥            /)/)
(=' :') ☆   ♥(¯`•.•´¯)   ☆  (':'=)
(,('')('') ¤°﹒☆`•.¸.•´ ☆♥ (")("),)
☆ Love begins with an image; lust with a sensation. ☆

I don't like mine, too cheesy. xD

Lust posted: (26th Mar 2011 01:02 am)

GabrielGonza posted: (26th Mar 2011 12:59 am)

Lust posted: (26th Mar 2011 12:58 am)

I also have another I write about 2-3weeks ago;

                            Thoughts.

I lay here and write besides the candlelight,

Thinking to myself, ''Always me, why?'',

Hoping my worries get through the night,

Surpassing the stars in the distant dark sky.

It's always one problem after another one,

Sincerely one day after another day,

Bad thing is, we're no-where near done,

Oh how I wish, thinking as I may.

I want us to be like others; seems so perfect,

I do so want it, badly, but it goes wrong,

Although I know, it simply has to reflect,

So I just lay here, writing to the beat of this song.

You're my world, my everything and my life,

I don't regret our past, it's made us close,

I'm so badly in-love with you, perhaps one day I'll be your wife,

Just want you to know, I love you the most.

I love your smile and alot of other things too,

Think of you all the time, you're always on my mind,

Really glad there's just me and you,

you say you love me more, you're wrong I think you'll find.

You have a talent for this. O: I like it.

Thank you. :p

It was to my bf Jon. (Saintdraco)

I never liked poetry, always thought it was stupid. But If these many people think that you're that good then I'd probably say you are too if I liked it.

GabrielGonza posted: (26th Mar 2011 01:03 am)

I don't like mine, too cheesy. xD

Not cheesy. I made this topic for the community so people can get involved and express their feelings into a poem. Glad you've taken part. :)

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♥(\(\    ☆       ♥            /)/)
(=' :') ☆   ♥(¯`•.•´¯)   ☆  (':'=)
(,('')('') ¤°﹒☆`•.¸.•´ ☆♥ (")("),)
☆ Love begins with an image; lust with a sensation. ☆